Inappropriate person: Difference between revisions

Revision as of 03:48, 29 September 2009

This article uses {{#switch: | i | first-person ("i") = first-person ("I") | we | first-person ("we") = first-person ("we") | first-person = first-person ("I" or "we") | you | second-person | second-person ("you") = second-person ("you") | = first-person ("I"; "we") or second-person ("you") | {{{2}}} }} inappropriately.
Please rewrite it to use a more formal, encyclopedic tone.

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-<center>'''{{ambox
+<center>'''This {{{1|article}}} '''uses [[grammatical person|{{#switch: {{lc: {{{2|}}}}}
-| type = style
-| text = This {{{1|article}}} '''uses [[grammatical person|{{#switch: {{lc: {{{2|}}}}}
   | i
   | first-person ("i") = first-person ("I")
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   | = first-person ("I"; "we") or second-person ("you")
   | {{{2}}}
-}}]] {{{3|inappropriately}}}'''. Please [{{fullurl:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|action=edit}} rewrite it] to use a more [[WP:TONE|formal, encyclopedic tone]]. '''</center>
+}}]] '''inappropriately'''. <br />
-<div style="text-align: center; font-size: 95%">Please focus on '''{{{1}}}'''<br>
+Please [{{fullurl:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|action=edit}} rewrite it] to use a more [[WP:TONE|formal, encyclopedic tone]]. </center></div></div>
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